Zackery Clayton
English language
11s1
January 16, 2017.
The most beautiful person in my life
She was the epitome of beauty, a woman whose beauty radiates like that of the sun in
which you know you shouldn’t stare, but sometimes you cannot turn away. To my critique
her beauty resembled a meadow of flowers of all kind of colour, pattern and eloquence and
her beauty did just not flow only from the outside but also extends to her inside. In which
this masterpiece had went to the same school as me and her name was Debra.
Not only is Debra the most beautiful female on the planet. She has the best personality I
have ever encountered. However in relations to her appearance it was unmatched by
billions; her hair was dark, curly and had a beautiful gloss and shimmer that complemented
her like the moon and the sea in a magnificent moonlit night. Her eyes were small, sharp
and fringed with long lashes, her eye colour was unique as it seem to be a splash of cocoa
brown infuse with the splendid colour of chestnut and her eyebrows were arched and well
trim as if they were carved out by one the great European artists. Her skin was as smooth as
the outer part of a mango, and as soft as a new-born baby and her skin colour resembled to
an African beauty dark brown which seem to be eternally unblemished from spots, scars
and bumps whatsoever. Her nose was small but dainty and her lips was as full and lush as
the first moon of the month and when she smiled it is like you are sunbathing in the glorious
sun on how warm and gentle it could feel towards you and not to mention it could make
you climb thousands of mountains just to see her smile one last time.
Her body was like a hourglass in which it had the shape and wondrous curves and due to
its known fact of keeping time it was like the more time passed the more beautiful she got.
She also had a gluteus Maximus that would drive any person mad with lust as all you will see
is strangers and passers- by, breaking their neck just for a moment as if they were taking a
mesmeric picture to their grave and finally her legs was a long and smooth as a bamboo
tree.
In addition to her magnificent appearance if you are lucky for her to talk to you when
she finally utters a word both her voice has a serenading tone and equally important you
could hear her fabulous personality roaring at you like a fire truck engine. In all; her
personality includes being: affectionate, reasonable, nice, gregarious, intelligent,
industrious, sympathetic and lastly joyful; But as in all 3 occasion trying to talk to the jewel
of this world only brought me to be frozen in my tracks as the most words that ever came
out was Hi and an awkward bye.
Word count: 446
English language
11s1
January 16, 2017.
The most beautiful person in my life
She was the epitome of beauty, a woman whose beauty radiates like that of the sun in
which you know you shouldn’t stare, but sometimes you cannot turn away. To my critique
her beauty resembled a meadow of flowers of all kind of colour, pattern and eloquence and
her beauty did just not flow only from the outside but also extends to her inside. In which
this masterpiece had went to the same school as me and her name was Debra.
Not only is Debra the most beautiful female on the planet. She has the best personality I
have ever encountered. However in relations to her appearance it was unmatched by
billions; her hair was dark, curly and had a beautiful gloss and shimmer that complemented
her like the moon and the sea in a magnificent moonlit night. Her eyes were small, sharp
and fringed with long lashes, her eye colour was unique as it seem to be a splash of cocoa
brown infuse with the splendid colour of chestnut and her eyebrows were arched and well
trim as if they were carved out by one the great European artists. Her skin was as smooth as
the outer part of a mango, and as soft as a new-born baby and her skin colour resembled to
an African beauty dark brown which seem to be eternally unblemished from spots, scars
and bumps whatsoever. Her nose was small but dainty and her lips was as full and lush as
the first moon of the month and when she smiled it is like you are sunbathing in the glorious
sun on how warm and gentle it could feel towards you and not to mention it could make
you climb thousands of mountains just to see her smile one last time.
Her body was like a hourglass in which it had the shape and wondrous curves and due to
its known fact of keeping time it was like the more time passed the more beautiful she got.
She also had a gluteus Maximus that would drive any person mad with lust as all you will see
is strangers and passers- by, breaking their neck just for a moment as if they were taking a
mesmeric picture to their grave and finally her legs was a long and smooth as a bamboo
tree.
In addition to her magnificent appearance if you are lucky for her to talk to you when
she finally utters a word both her voice has a serenading tone and equally important you
could hear her fabulous personality roaring at you like a fire truck engine. In all; her
personality includes being: affectionate, reasonable, nice, gregarious, intelligent,
industrious, sympathetic and lastly joyful; But as in all 3 occasion trying to talk to the jewel
of this world only brought me to be frozen in my tracks as the most words that ever came
out was Hi and an awkward bye.
Word count: 446
