1
, Extended Metaphor Structure
Yes L w 1 stanza
4 25 Lines
wFreeverse
repitit.io
w Enjambment and
it
Poem 1: Strangers Forever
ranger
tone Diction register
wmelancholy WD
Each of us wsorrow.am
on
Dictionin thispoem
is a passenger
seated in one huge p S S t.la
noserious
w.io ema i ei iiip ime
p
compartment
conversational message
going we do not know where
Themes
vealsthe 1 Alliterition
all strangers S knowledge
rposeof thrown together by chance w Humanexperience
epoem
who travel without arriving; 1 Question Do we ever reallyknow others
Who can read the whispers
of your mind EE n i aE ai in
destinationwhen they are hidden 2 Question Do we ever trulyknow ourself
we know the whispers of our
even from you? 3m
Though you open a window
in the chambers of your heart
though you strive to say
on
what you feel
and in striving reach
J to truly now the people around us
ound havefiguredoutwhowe are thereis a
new
hroughout a state of understanding 3Question 3
Alliteration
hepoem there is still one gg
betteridea ofourselves now we can shift our
part focus
one small part 9 1 16
that remains your own
one part Climax of Poems
that neither I nor anyone else
is
will ever penetrate. EEE Eakins 4th
Forever strangers.
C refrain
wg.gg dp piebinsotuTfes's
2
, Poem 2: Sonnet 104: To me, fair friend, you never can be
old 2 types ofSonnets
1 Shakespeariansonnets
ÉÉÉÉ
ÉÉÉEin
BY WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE
If I daily Elizabethan sonnets
lines
refrain repetitions
To me, fair friend, you never can be old,
iteration
mbi edntmffe99
For as you were when first your eye I eyed, gs megnsqse
f Alliteration 3 gautrains 12lines Problem
fggfj.IE Such seems your beauty still. Three winters cold Rhymingcouplet Last2lines solut
Alliteration
Have from the forests shook three summers’ pride,
Three beauteous springs to yellow autumn turned
hashown 2 Italiansonnets
I É rs
Alliteration
In process of the seasons have I seen,
ÉÉ
IÉ Since first I saw you fresh, which yet are green.
Three April perfumes in three hot Junes burned, abalibfacdefefa
shem
Ef.su iambic
stge
Pentiamiter
Itam for First 8lines Octave
Problem
similie
Ah, yet doth beauty, like a dial-hand,
I Last 6lines sestet solution
Steal from his figure, and no pace perceived;
Alliteration
So your sweet hue, which methinks still doth stand,
Eh
ÉÉfÉfÉ agitation Hath motion, and mine eye may be deceived:
future
changes
agetounbred:
talkin
For fear of which, hear this, thou
Ere you were born was beauty’s summer dead. qq.gesqg.insahegisngafffheb adm fire
Tone Themes Diction Message
Athoritative Beauty wFormalrigister Don'tliveyourlifeworrying if
Commanding youare beautifu
Time w OldEngl5h enough rather justliveyourlifehappy
loveling nature
Inspirational Vanidy
Modern Translation
o me m dear friend youcould
never beold foryourbeautyseems
unchanged from the first time I saw your eyes
beautifulsprings
Three coldwintershavepassed into summer and three
have become autumns In the course of the four seasons
Theperfumed scents of three Aprilsburned up in three not Junessince first
I saw you in your youthful prime and you are still as beautiful and young
Butbeautymoves forwardcontinually impercepitibly like thehands of a
clock In the same way yourbeauty which seems unchanged to me moves
forward deceiving my eyes 3
will lose looks hear this unborngenerations
, Extended Metaphor Structure
Yes L w 1 stanza
4 25 Lines
wFreeverse
repitit.io
w Enjambment and
it
Poem 1: Strangers Forever
ranger
tone Diction register
wmelancholy WD
Each of us wsorrow.am
on
Dictionin thispoem
is a passenger
seated in one huge p S S t.la
noserious
w.io ema i ei iiip ime
p
compartment
conversational message
going we do not know where
Themes
vealsthe 1 Alliterition
all strangers S knowledge
rposeof thrown together by chance w Humanexperience
epoem
who travel without arriving; 1 Question Do we ever reallyknow others
Who can read the whispers
of your mind EE n i aE ai in
destinationwhen they are hidden 2 Question Do we ever trulyknow ourself
we know the whispers of our
even from you? 3m
Though you open a window
in the chambers of your heart
though you strive to say
on
what you feel
and in striving reach
J to truly now the people around us
ound havefiguredoutwhowe are thereis a
new
hroughout a state of understanding 3Question 3
Alliteration
hepoem there is still one gg
betteridea ofourselves now we can shift our
part focus
one small part 9 1 16
that remains your own
one part Climax of Poems
that neither I nor anyone else
is
will ever penetrate. EEE Eakins 4th
Forever strangers.
C refrain
wg.gg dp piebinsotuTfes's
2
, Poem 2: Sonnet 104: To me, fair friend, you never can be
old 2 types ofSonnets
1 Shakespeariansonnets
ÉÉÉÉ
ÉÉÉEin
BY WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE
If I daily Elizabethan sonnets
lines
refrain repetitions
To me, fair friend, you never can be old,
iteration
mbi edntmffe99
For as you were when first your eye I eyed, gs megnsqse
f Alliteration 3 gautrains 12lines Problem
fggfj.IE Such seems your beauty still. Three winters cold Rhymingcouplet Last2lines solut
Alliteration
Have from the forests shook three summers’ pride,
Three beauteous springs to yellow autumn turned
hashown 2 Italiansonnets
I É rs
Alliteration
In process of the seasons have I seen,
ÉÉ
IÉ Since first I saw you fresh, which yet are green.
Three April perfumes in three hot Junes burned, abalibfacdefefa
shem
Ef.su iambic
stge
Pentiamiter
Itam for First 8lines Octave
Problem
similie
Ah, yet doth beauty, like a dial-hand,
I Last 6lines sestet solution
Steal from his figure, and no pace perceived;
Alliteration
So your sweet hue, which methinks still doth stand,
Eh
ÉÉfÉfÉ agitation Hath motion, and mine eye may be deceived:
future
changes
agetounbred:
talkin
For fear of which, hear this, thou
Ere you were born was beauty’s summer dead. qq.gesqg.insahegisngafffheb adm fire
Tone Themes Diction Message
Athoritative Beauty wFormalrigister Don'tliveyourlifeworrying if
Commanding youare beautifu
Time w OldEngl5h enough rather justliveyourlifehappy
loveling nature
Inspirational Vanidy
Modern Translation
o me m dear friend youcould
never beold foryourbeautyseems
unchanged from the first time I saw your eyes
beautifulsprings
Three coldwintershavepassed into summer and three
have become autumns In the course of the four seasons
Theperfumed scents of three Aprilsburned up in three not Junessince first
I saw you in your youthful prime and you are still as beautiful and young
Butbeautymoves forwardcontinually impercepitibly like thehands of a
clock In the same way yourbeauty which seems unchanged to me moves
forward deceiving my eyes 3
will lose looks hear this unborngenerations
